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 Post subject: Comic in Irish
PostPosted: Fri 01 Mar 2013 9:25 pm 
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Dia dhuit.

Here is one of the comics I made in Irish.

I hope this works with connecting the link below to photobucket in order to view it.


http://s729.beta.photobucket.com/user/b ... 3.jpg.html.

http://i729.photobucket.com/albums/ww29 ... 9e6813.jpg

http://s729.beta.photobucket.com/user/b ... 3.jpg.html


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 Post subject: Re: Comic in Irish
PostPosted: Sat 02 Mar 2013 8:40 pm 
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It seems you have to have a photobucket account to view them. Image

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 Post subject: Re: Comic in Irish
PostPosted: Sat 16 Mar 2013 1:18 am 
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Ok -- I'll have to figure something else out...Thanks!


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 Post subject: Re: Comic in Irish
PostPosted: Sat 16 Mar 2013 2:42 pm 
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I see "deleted image" and loads of doggie photos.
I wasn't signed in.

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 Post subject: Re: Comic in Irish
PostPosted: Fri 22 Mar 2013 3:45 am 
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http://s729.photobucket.com/user/balipi ... sort=3&o=0

Dia Dhuit Brid

Ok,, try this link above.....I moved some things around to organize the stories better.

Let me know if you can see it now.

Thanks

PS -- Sorry for the delay in response....My computer crashed this weekend, and I had to buy a new one.


Last edited by Balipio on Wed 27 Mar 2013 7:08 pm, edited 2 times in total.

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 Post subject: Re: Comic in Irish
PostPosted: Fri 22 Mar 2013 3:38 pm 
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Ligfaimid iad go go léir a thréad!

1. Tréad is a noun, not a verb. I don't know what the proper verb to use here is.
2. *Ligfaimid isn't possible, as it violates the rule of caol le caol agus leathan le leathan.
3. -f(a)imid is future indicative (i.e. "we will"), not imperative.
4. AFAIK, no dialect constructs horatives with lig in any case. You would just use the first-person imperative, e.g. Ithimis! "Let's eat."
5. Is the second go simply a typo?


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 Post subject: Re: Comic in Irish
PostPosted: Sun 24 Mar 2013 2:23 am 
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Thanks Domhnaillin......I will check the corrections. I have a good Irish friend who checks my write ups, but she is from Dublin. Gaeilge is not her native language, so I am sure she has missed a few things.

Let me know if you see any more.

Go raibh maith agat arís,
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 Post subject: Re: Comic in Irish
PostPosted: Sun 24 Mar 2013 7:05 pm 
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Balipio wrote:
Thanks Domhnaillin......I will check the corrections. I have a good Irish friend who checks my write ups, but she is from Dublin. Gaeilge is not her native language, so I am sure she has missed a few things.

Let me know if you see any more.

Oh, there are plenty more. Ní féidir liom titim ina chodladh literally means "It's not possible for me to fall into his sleep"; it should be i mo chodladh. The plural I learned for "sheep" is caoirigh, not *caoraigh--or is that a dialect form from somewhere? In the verbal noun phrase, prepositional objects (unlike direct objects) come after, not before, e.g. caoirigh a chomhaireamh but not *linn a chomhaireamh (which is false anyway, as--go bhfios dom--comhaireamh takes a direct object and not a prepositional one).

Also, I'm not a fluent speaker, but I find a lot of the sentences sound too literally translated. For instance, seachrán saor: seachrán already means "straying", so the saor adds nothing (and should probably be preceded by go since it's being used adverbially). I learned that chomh must be used with seo with adjectives to express "so", e.g. chomh tuirseach seo "as tired as this". And that an iarracht is something you tabhair ar a thing, not something you déan le (although I do see some people using déan iarracht to mean "try to [do something] rather than simply "make an effort").

I never want to say too much, since there's a good chance some of these features are acceptable, just not part of what I've been exposed to. But some of the errors are so basic (like using tréad as a verb) that I wonder how decent your friend's Irish really is. If you find yourself looking up a lot of words in an English-to-Irish dictionary, it really behooves you to check them in an Irish-to-English one before you try using them.


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 Post subject: Re: Comic in Irish
PostPosted: Wed 27 Mar 2013 6:49 pm 
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Dia dhuit Domhnaillin

I really appreciate the help, as it also helps me learn the language from a practical stance.

I don't know the extent of Irish fluency of my contact in Dublin. I think she has only learned the basics in school, so she translates word for word sometimes. I've only been learning Irish for a few months, so I am still not at learning phrases.

I'll make the corrections and memorize the new phrases!

Please, feel free to let me know of any further mistakes in the corrections. I have four Irish comics posted in the link.

Go raibh maith agat arís!
BYron


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 Post subject: Re: Comic in Irish
PostPosted: Wed 27 Mar 2013 7:11 pm 
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http://s729.photobucket.com/user/balipi ... sort=3&o=1

http://s729.photobucket.com/user/balipi ... sort=3&o=2

http://s729.photobucket.com/user/balipi ... sort=3&o=3

I posted the links to the other 3 stories I made in Irish. They are all in the same album and can be accessed simply by scrolling back and forth.

The corrections are very helpful for my learning.
All feedback and corrections are greatly appreciated!

Go raibh maith agat!


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