Looks good to me.

In the Ulster dialect, one would say it as bíonn cúis le gach ní a tharlaíos. And I believe in Connemara, they’d say it as bíonn údar le chuile ní a tharlaíonns (?). But the version here works fine for the standardised orthography (and for Munster?).

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Not a native speaker.

Always wait for at least three people to agree on a translation, especially if it’s for something permanent.

My translations are usually GU (Ulster Irish), unless CO (Standard Orthography) is requested.